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Unfortunately I don't know many neighbors. I have few neighbors who are close to me. I am going to tell you one of my neighbors His name is Kim Min-Sung and he is also my coworker He lives 5 minutes walk away from my house. I met him 3 years ago Actually I first met him in the company because we were in same dapartment. Since then, we have kept our relationship well. During holidays , I would visit his house. and we talk about the daily routine. When we hang out outside , we usually have a meal and go to downtown to see a movie. I think he is a good man and I hope our friendship will last for a long time. --------------

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