Are you satisfied with your current situation right now? Why or why not?

2018-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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It's endless issues we have been facing. I used to ask if i was happy every days. It was not possible to answer, because we would like to have money more than we currently have, live the bigger house than we are living and more expensive car than we have. I was a person who want to learn everything before I got married and had babies. I had a hard time when I needed to give up most things around my life. Maybe, I felt unhappy at that time because I was not ready to be a father. Once I have gotten up my life and decided to live for my family, there were anything I worried about. The happiness depends on how we make our mind. Of course, I felt upset when I had to take care of my children for a long time. If parents don't sacrifice themselves, they might have a sad life.

강사 첨삭

This is true, Sir [이름]!

We need to be in the right state of mind when dealing with decisions in life, not just for our own good, but for the sake of our family. The transition from living single to a married life isn\'t a smooth sailing, so I understand how you feel. We need time to let everything sink in, and the adjustment period will be continuously. What\'s even important is, we got loads of motivation boosters every day. Cheer up! See you..

~Teacher Eunice


It\'s endless issues we have been facing.
>>>
It\'s an endless issue we have been facing.

I used to ask if i was happy every days. 

>>> I used to ask myself if I was happy every day. 

It was not possible to answer, because we would like to have money more than we currently have, live the bigger house than we are living and more expensive car than we have. 

>>> It was not possible to answer because we would like to have money more than we currently have, live in a bigger house than we are living in, and more expensive cars than we have.

I was a person who want to learn everything before I got married and had babies.

>>> I was a person who wanted to learn everything before I got married and had babies.  

I had a hard time when I needed to give up most things around my life.

>>> I had a hard time when I needed to give up some things in my life.  

Maybe, I felt unhappy at that time because I was not ready to be a father. 

>>> Correct!

Once I have gotten up my life and decided to live for my family, there were anything I worried about. 

>>> Once I have gotten up my life and decided to live for my family, there weren\'t anything I am worried about. 

The happiness depends on how we make our mind. 

>>> Our happiness depends on how we make our mind.

>>> OR: Our happiness depends on how we think.  

Of course, I felt upset when I had to take care of my children for a long time.

>>> Correct!

If parents don\'t sacrifice themselves, they might have a sad life.

>>> Correct!

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