Are you scared of a particular animal?

i am most scared of snakes because of their poison and appearance. Usually, we can’t see snake around home or office, but sometimes, i find snake when i play golf or farm in the land. when i was playing golf some years ago, i found a snake near my golf ball, and i ruined the game that day and lost much money. It is necessary to be afraid of snakes and we must run away from snake.

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i am most scared of snakes because of their poison and appearance. 

>> I am most scared of snakes because of their poison and appearance.

Usually, we can’t see snake around home or office, but sometimes, i find snake when i play golf or farm in the land. 

>> Usually, we can’t see snakes around the home or office, but sometimes I see them when I play golf or farm on my land.

OR>> Usually, snakes are not seen around homes or offices, but I sometimes find them when I play golf or work on my farm.

when i was playing golf some years ago, i found a snake near my golf ball, and i ruined the game that day and lost much money. 

>> When I was playing golf a few years ago, I found a snake near my golf ball, and I ruined the game that day and lost a lot of money. 

OR>> A few years ago, while playing golf, I found a snake near my ball, which ruined my game that day and cost me a lot of money.

It is necessary to be afraid of snakes and we must run away from snake. 

>> It is necessary to be afraid of snakes, and we must run away from them.

OR>> We should be cautious of snakes, and it is always best to run away from them.