Are you the type of person who is good at keeping something under your hat? Why do you say so?

2014-05-26 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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I'm very good at keeping something under my hat. I will tell you my stories which is pertinent to keeping something secret, I should understand how I'm good at it. When I was a young school boy, I did well in hiding my faults or mistakes. For example, I was very adept not to show my bad test scores to my parents, however I was not hesitant to show my good test scores to them. Second, whenever I got someone to like in schooldays, I used to be very passive to show my heart to them. I really wanted to conceal my feelings to them because I thought that they should feel uncomfortable to me when they realized my affection to them. However sometimes I can't help my mind being detected to the girl who I liked involuntarily. It was really hard for me to escape my mind being caught by her. Lastly one of the reasons that I am good at keeping secret is that I try to hold my tongue very well. Even if I'm good at keeping something under my hat, It is not always easy for me to keep it secret.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for sharing a part of your life here, [이름]! Compared with your very first composition, I feel like this one was written with ease. You must have been so relaxed while writing this down. This one generated more questions in my head. Is it all right for me to ask you more questions regarding this one, [이름]? Just tell me if you don\'t mind. No worries! Your secrets will be safe with me. Or maybe not quite because our classes are all recorded. Nonetheless, just share with me what you want and can. You know that my ears are all yours. I can\'t wait to talk with you again, [이름]! Keep safe and enjoy the rest of the day! _Klein I\'m very good at keeping something under my hat. >>Correct I will tell you my stories which is pertinent to keeping something secret, I should understand how I\'m good at it. >>I will tell you my stories, which are pertinent to keeping something a secret, so you should understand how good I am at it.When I was a young school boy, I did well in hiding my faults or mistakes. >>Correct! For example, I was very adept not to show my bad test scores to my parents, however I was not hesitant to show my good test scores to them. >>Correct!Second, whenever I got someone to like in schooldays, I used to be very passive to show my heart to them. >>Correct OR >> Secondly, whenever I have someone I like during my schooldays, I used to be vey passive in showing my heart to them. I really wanted to conceal my feelings to them because I thought that they should feel uncomfortable to me when they realized my affection to them. >>I really wanted to conceal my feelings to them because I thought that they would feel uncomfortable with me when they realize my affection to them. However sometimes I can\'t help my mind being detected to the girl who I liked involuntarily. >>However, sometimes, I can\'t help my mind from being detected/discovered by the girl who I like involuntarily. It was really hard for me to escape my mind being caught by her. >>Correct OR >> It was really hard for me to prevent my mind from being discovered by her. >> It was really hard for me to prevent my feelings from being discovered.Lastly one of the reasons that I am good at keeping secret is that I try to hold my tongue very well. >>Correct! OR >> Lastly, one of the reasons that I am good at keeping secrets is that I try to bite my tongue very well.Even if I\'m good at keeping something under my hat, It is not always easy for me to keep it secret. >>Even if I\'m good at keeping something under my hat, it is not always easy for me to keep everything a secret.

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