Are You Willing to Relocate?
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I am willing to relocate. Working in London would provide me with international exposure and a global financial market with a long history to learn from the best in the industry. On top of that, I am looking forward to broadening a client base by working at the London office. From previous experiences, I have had a hands-on experience working closely with APAC clients where I could learn different perspectives of various market players and develop my skillset. Working at your company as part of the client service team would broaden the client base to Europe. Throughout the experience, I could learn different financial market demands and unique workflow where I could equip with communication skills to convene ideas efficiently to clients. Relocation is a strenuous process, but I firmly believe it is worth taking a new challenge considering the knowledge and skillset I could improve.
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Thanks for this Aciel! Enjoy your weekend.
I am willing to relocate.
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Working in London would provide me with international exposure and a global financial market with a long history to learn from the best in the industry.
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On top of that, I am looking forward to broadening a client base by working at the London office.
>>> On top of that, I am looking forward to broadening client base by working at the London office.
From previous experiences, I have had a hands-on experience working closely with APAC clients where I could learn different perspectives of various market players and develop my skillset. Working at your company as part of the client service team would broaden the client base to Europe.
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Working at your company as part of the client service team would broaden the client base to Europe.
>>> Correct
Throughout the experience, I could learn different financial market demands and unique workflow where I could equip with communication skills to convene ideas efficiently to clients.
>>> Throughout the experience, I could learn different financial market demands and unique workflow where I could be equipped with communication skills to convene ideas efficiently to clients.
Relocation is a strenuous process, but I firmly believe it is worth taking a new challenge considering the knowledge and skillset I could improve.
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