Are you worried someone could hack into your computer? What could you lose if someone hacked into yo
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In reality I don\'t worry .
So I will write assume that I do worry.
if hake into my computer
I will lost my life\'s picture and video.
and my woking data.
so sometimes I will change my password.
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In reality, I don\'t worry.
>>> CORRECTSo I will write assume that I do worry.
>>> So I will write assuming that I do worry.
if hake into my computer
>>> If my computer will be hacked.
>>> If my computer will be hacked.
I will lost my life\'s picture and video.
>>> I will lose my pictures and videos.
and my woking data.
>>> and my working data.
so sometimes I will change my password. reality all of your experiences that determine how things appear to you More (Definitions, Synonyms, Translation)
>>> I will lose my pictures and videos.
and my woking data.
>>> and my working data.
so sometimes I will change my password. reality all of your experiences that determine how things appear to you More (Definitions, Synonyms, Translation)
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