" Are young people going cool on cars? "
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On Monday 23th July 2018
\" Are young people going cool on cars? \"
A couple of weeks ago, we\'ve talked about it to prefer using transport or using own car in our life.
>> A couple of weeks ago, we\'ve talked about what do we prefer using; public transportation or our own car.
In fact, I don\'t realize that it\'s going to decrease using a personal car. I think that it\'s not talking about Asia counties.
>> In fact, I didn\'t realize that the use of personal car will decrease. I think it\'s not talking about Asian countries.
Anyway, most of people prefer to use transport according to the article because in the moment, infrastructure transport is good.
>> Anyway, most people prefer to use public transport according to the article because at the moment, the infrastructure for public transportation is good.
Obviously, I agree that I also used to take transport when I was a students. It\'s great transport and cheap fee.
>> Obviously, I agree that I used to take public transportation when I was a student. It\'s convenient and cheap.
Just, there is disadvantage that it\'s a litter unconformable status. nevertheless, the number of people prefer to use it.
>> There are just disadvantage about it\'s litter unconformable status. Nevertheless, a number of people prefer to use it.
But I think that it\'s going to positive for all commuters. also, most of transport have been focusing on people to give to better using it.
>> But I think that it\'s going to be positive for all commuters, also, most transportation system have been focusing on giving a better use of it.
Even though, some people don\'t give up using a own car, I think that the trend of transport will be more developed.
>> Even thought some people don\'t give up using their own cars. I think that the trend of using public transportation will be more developed.
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