" Are young people going cool on cars? "

2018-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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On Monday 23th July 2018 " Are young people going cool on cars? " A couple of weeks ago, we've talked about it to prefer using transport or using own car in our life. In fact, I don't realize that it's going to decrease using a personal car. I think that it's not talking about Asia counties. Anyway, most of people prefer to use transport according to the article because in the moment, infrastructure transport is good. Obviously, I agree that I also used to take transport when I was a students. It's great transport and cheap fee. Just, there is disadvantage that it's a litter unconformable status. nevertheless, the number of people prefer to use it. But I think that it's going to positive for all commuters. also, most of transport have been focusing on people to give to better using it. Even though, some people don't give up using a own car, I think that the trend of transport will be more developed.

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On Monday 23th July 2018

\" Are young people going cool on cars? \"

A couple of weeks ago, we\'ve talked about it to prefer using transport or using own car in our life.
>> A couple of weeks ago, we\'ve talked about what do we prefer using; public transportation or our own car.
In fact, I don\'t realize that it\'s going to decrease using a personal car. I think that it\'s not talking about Asia counties.
>> In fact, I didn\'t realize that the use of personal car will decrease. I think it\'s not talking about Asian countries.
Anyway, most of people prefer to use transport according to the article because in the moment, infrastructure transport is good.
>> Anyway, most people prefer to use public transport according to the article because at the moment, the infrastructure for public transportation is good.
Obviously, I agree that I also used to take transport when I was a students. It\'s great transport and cheap fee.
>> Obviously, I agree that I used to take public transportation when I was a student. It\'s convenient and cheap.
Just, there is disadvantage that it\'s a litter unconformable status. nevertheless, the number of people prefer to use it.
>> There are just disadvantage about it\'s litter unconformable status. Nevertheless, a number of people prefer to use it.
But I think that it\'s going to positive for all commuters. also, most of transport have been focusing on people to give to better using it.
>> But I think that it\'s going to be positive for all commuters, also, most transportation system have been focusing on giving a better use of it.
Even though, some people don\'t give up using a own car, I think that the trend of transport will be more developed.

>> Even thought some people don\'t give up using their own cars. I think that the trend of using public transportation will be more developed.

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