Argument
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How do you usually handle arguments with friends? Are you a confrontational person?
I think I am an accepting person. Even though someone hurt me, I can accept their appologies if they feel sorry from the hearts. So I like to talk about our feelings or falt, and through those conversation I can understand and know others more. So when I have argument, I try to listen to them and convey my though as well. It doesn\'t work at times, but still I think it is worthy. So when it comes to my friends, I am a confrontational person.
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Question: How do you usually handle arguments with friends? Are you a confrontational person?
Your Answer: I think I am an accepting person. Even though someone hurt me, I can accept their appologies if they feel sorry from the hearts. So I like to talk about our feelings or falt, and through those conversation I can understand and know others more. So when I have argument, I try to listen to them and convey my though as well. It doesn\'t work at times, but still I think it is worthy. So when it comes to my friends, I am a confrontational person.
>> I think I am an accepting person. Even when someone hurts me, I can accept their apology as long as its sincere. I like to talk about my feelings and faults, and through those conversations, I can understand and know more about others. When I have arguments with other people, I try to listen to them and convey my thoughts as well. It doesn\'t work sometimes, but I still think that it is worth it. When it comes to my friends, I am a confrontational person.
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