Arguments with coworker

2010-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 lina

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I have had an arguments with one of my coworker. He was not my shift. but when I or he worked over time, we worked together. One day, It was very busy and there were a lot of tasks I had to do. But I couldn't find him for about an hour. I thought there was some reason. But about an hour later , he appeared and told me that he went to smoke. I got mad at him so that I gave him an advise that not to smoke during a busy day. he looked like to feel sorry about that. Giving an advise to someone is always hard. but If they can take the meaning of an advise, It really helps to keep the relationship well.

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Hi [이름].I understand that it's not easy to give an advice to someone and especially if you don't know the person personally.that's why you have to paraphrase you're advice to a friendly one.We cannot please anybody too.Anyway,As long as you know to yourself that you're doing the right thing and not hurting anyone.Keep going!There's a lot ahead for you.See you on Monday!   LINA   I have had an arguments with one of my coworker. >> I have had an argument with one of my coworker. He was not my shift.>>He was not in my shift >>We have different shiftbut when I or he worked over time,>> but when I or he worked over time,we worked together. >>CorrectOne day, It was very busy and there were a lot of tasks I had to do. >>CorrectBut I couldn't find him for about an hour. >>CorrectI thought there was some reason. >>CorrectBut about an hour later , >>Correct >>But after about an hour.Better he appeared and told me that he went to smoke. >>Correct >>He showed up and told me that he went out to smoke.I got mad at him so that I gave him an advise that not to smokeduring a busy day.>>Correct >>”Advice” noun-Advise verb. >>I gave him an advice >>I advise him to.he looked like to feel sorry about that. >>correct >>He looked sorry about that.Giving an advise to someone is always hard.>>Giving an advice to someone is always hard.but If they can take the meaning of an advise,>>But if they know/take the meaning of an advice.It really helps to keep the relationship well. >>Correct  

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