Art
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: What kind of art do you like? Why?
I like drawing art.
I\'ve won a painting contest.
It was small contest that hosted by a cafe.
The theme is \'Camping\'.
When I won that contest, suddenly I became fond of painting.
Now I like painting still-life painting. : )
강사 첨삭
Wow!
I\'ve won a painting contest.
It was small contest that hosted by a cafe.
The theme is \'Camping\'.
When I won that contest, suddenly I became fond of painting.
Now I like painting still-life painting. : )
Congratulations on winning the contest, sweetie! ~~
I can\'t wait to see you again. ^^
~t. Ally
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I like drawing art.
>> CORRECT!
I\'ve won a painting contest.
>> CORRECT!
It was small contest that hosted by a cafe.
>> It was a small contest hosted by a cafe.
The theme is \'Camping\'.
>> CORRECT!
When I won that contest, suddenly I became fond of painting.
>> CORRECT!
Now I like painting still-life painting. : )
>> Now I like making still-life paintings,
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