Art class.
학생이 쓴 원문
Last Saturday, I went to Art class.
It was located almost next to my school.
So, my mom let me ride my bike to go to Art class.
I was excited about Art class.
During class time, I had a lesson about drawing a cylinder and cone.
강사 첨삭
I wish I could see some of your artworks. Here are your corrections. -Teacher JM
Last Saturday, I went to Art class.>>>Correct
It was located almost next to my school.
It was located almost next to my school.
>>>It is located almost next to my school.
So, my mom let me ride my bike to go to Art class.
So, my mom let me ride my bike to go to Art class.
>>>So, my mom lets me ride my bike to go to Art class.
I was excited about Art class.
I was excited about Art class.
>>>Correct
During class time, I had a lesson about drawing a cylinder and cone.
During class time, I had a lesson about drawing a cylinder and cone.
>>>Correct
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