Art is fun!

2017-03-16 · 첨삭 강사 Nova

학생이 쓴 원문

I haved Art in the scool. I drowed my best freind. My faverit subject is art. I did my best. I thinked that i drowed wonderful. And my freinds sad it is perfect. I think the art is fun.

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Wow [이름]! Thank you for making your homework. However, please take note of the corrections.

I haved Art in the scool.
>> We do art in school.
>> We have Art subject in school.

I drowed my best freind.
>> I drew my best friend.

My faverit subject is art.
>> My favorite subject is Art.

I did my best.
>> Correct
>> OR: I i my best in Art.

I thinked that i drowed wonderful.
>> I thought that I drew it wonderfully.
>> OR: I thought I drew it wonderfully.

And my freinds sad it is perfect.
>> My friends said it\'s perfect.

I think the art is fun.
>> I think that Art is fun.
>> I think Art is fun.

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