Art is important!
학생이 쓴 원문
Because I think the world without art would be desolate. There are so many people who acknowledge and express themselves through art. We don\'t have to think of art as difficult. Art is important because it is all around us.
강사 첨삭
Many thanks for doing your homework religiously, Ben! I have checked it and you did well. Keep up the good work and if you have questions, feel free to ask me. See you in class. Thank you! ^^ ~ T.Gelly
Because I think the world without art would be desolate.
>> It is important because the world would be desolate without art.
There are so many people who acknowledge and express themselves through art.
>> Correct!
We don\'t have to think of art as difficult.
>> We don\'t really have to think that art is complicated because that is what it is.
Art is important because it is all around us.
>> Art is important because it is where we are now.
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