Art . science

How are you MISS SARAH!

Thanks a lot for doing your homework. I appreciate your effort.

I made some corrections below. I hope you could go over them.

See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Shanee^^,

There are no science and technology in the past. 

>>> There was no science and technology in the past.
At that time they depended on agriculture and enjoyed art on their spare time.

>>> At that time, they depended on agriculture and enjoyed art in / during their spare time.

And that time people are static and lyric.

>>> And that time, people were static. [I don\'t understand what you\'re trying to say here.]
But as science develops, many things are changed rapidly and they want more development .

>>> But as science develops, many things changed rapidly and people want more development.

People are always busy and can\'t afford to enjoy art.

>>> People are always busy that they can\'t afford to enjoy art.

But if we consider that movie is also another art. 

>>> But if we consider it, movie is also another form of art.
These days many people love to watch movies.

>>> Correct!
New movies are released every day and many people enjoy.

>>> OR: New movies are released every day and many people enjoy them.
In my thinking just the taste is changed from appreciating art to watching movie.

>>> In my opinion, just the taste of people in art changed to appreciating movies.

Movie is more active and touches the emotion directly.

>>> Movies are more motivating and touching.