As a Korean citizen, what do you think should the government focus on nowadays? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
As a Korean citizen, I think that the government focus on a project to support the underprivileged. Because of covid-19, an economic slump occurs and the life of the underprivileged becomes difficult.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!~
It\'s quite amazing that you are aware of such things at a young age.
I hope this crisis gets better in the near future so that the entire nation can also have a good life in the long run.
~t. Ally
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As a Korean citizen, I think that the government focus on a project to support the underprivileged.
>> As a Korean citizen, I think that the government should focus on a project to support the underprivileged.
Because of covid-19, an economic slump occurs and the life of the underprivileged becomes difficult.
>> Because of the COVID-19, an economic slump has occurred, and the life of the underprivileged has become difficult.
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