As a patent, is it better to control your children\'s future or just let them be and let them decide
학생이 쓴 원문
I think every people have their own fate.
Although parent try to control their children\'s future, it won\'t work.
Only parent\'s duty is watching sensitively what they like and what they do well and then care and support them.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Ms. [이름]!
I think every people have their own fate.
>>> I think every person has his/her own fate.
Although parent try to control their children\'s future, it won\'t work.
Although parent try to control their children\'s future, it won\'t work.
>>> Although their parents try to control the children\'s future, it won\'t work.
Only parent\'s duty is watching sensitively what they like and what they do well and then care and support them.
Only parent\'s duty is watching sensitively what they like and what they do well and then care and support them.
>>> Parents\' only duty is watching sensitively what they like and what they do well and then care and support them.
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