As for now, I have no plans for future.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello!^^
Thank you for sending your homework.
Cheers!
Jean
>>What plans have you made for your retirement?
To retire, yet there\'s lot of time.
And I am busy to do present thing.
>> I still have a lot of time before retirement and as of now, I am busy living my life.
What do you curious about me??
>> Why are you curious about me? (All homework given are related to the discussions in class.)
I am a stout healthy korean man.
>> I am a stout healthy Korean man.
And I would refer to retirement, being about that time, one shall be given a lot money. Don\'t you think so?
>> And if we refer to retirement, it\'s that time when one is given a lot of money, isn\'t it?
My father already retired. And given a retirement salary so that we bought a land to built a building which is now earning a monthly renting pay.
>> My father was given a retirement pay when he retired, which we used to buy a land to build a building which is now earning rental fees.
That\'s all.
>> correct
My expressing will need a lot of repairing for the sake of you.
>> Expressing my thoughts into words still needs a lot of work.
In eariler when you teach, teacher ask me to make at least five sentences to improve my skill. I keep that in mind.
>> You instructed me to write at least five sentences to improve my skill. I\'ll keep that in mind.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.