As for now, I have no plans for future.

2018-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

To retire, yet there's lot of time. And I am busy to do present thing. What do you curious about me?? I am a stout healthy korean man. And I would refer to retirement, being about that time, one shall be given a lot money. Don't you think so? My father already retired. And given a retirement salary so that we bought a land to built a building which is now earning a monthly renting pay. That's all. My expressing will need a lot of repairing for the sake of you. In eariler when you teach, teacher ask me to make at least five sentences to improve my skill. I keep that in mind. Thanks for reading. Bye.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^


Thank you for sending your homework.


Cheers!
Jean



>>What plans have you made for your retirement?


To retire, yet there\'s lot of time.
 And I am busy to do present thing.

>> I still have a lot of time before retirement and as of now, I am busy living my life. 


 What do you curious about me??

>> Why are you curious about me? (All homework given are related to the discussions in class.)


 I am a stout healthy korean man.

>>  I am a stout healthy Korean man.


 And I would refer to retirement, being about that time, one shall be given a lot money. Don\'t you think so?

>> And if we refer to retirement, it\'s that time when one is given a lot of money, isn\'t it?


 My father already retired. And given a retirement salary so that we bought a land to built a building which is now earning a monthly renting pay.

>> My father was given a retirement pay when he retired, which we used to buy a land to build a building which is now earning rental fees. 


That\'s all.

>> correct


 My expressing will need a lot of repairing for the sake of you.

>> Expressing my thoughts into words still needs a lot of work.


 In eariler when you teach, teacher ask me to make at least five sentences to improve my skill. I keep that in mind.

>> You instructed me to write at least five sentences to improve my skill. I\'ll keep that in mind.

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