as if I was a weather caster
학생이 쓴 원문
Good Morning. I am at home . It is raining a lot. I don`t like rain because of getting damp and feeling like some pain. I had accident traffic about 10 years ago. I was a hospital for 1 months. since then when it was rainning I felt some pain. but nowaday I got better. I knew advance before it was rain. as if I was a weather caster.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir John. Thank you for this.
- T. Beth
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Good Morning. >>> correct
I am at home .
>>> correct
It is raining a lot.
>>> correct
I don`t like rain because of getting damp and feeling like some pain.
>>> I don`t like the rain because of getting damp and feeling some pain.
I had accident traffic about 10 years ago.
>>> I had a traffic accident about 10 years ago.
I was a hospital for 1 months.
>>> I was in the hospital for a month.
since then when it was rainning I felt some pain.
>>> Since then, when it was raining I felt some pain.
but nowaday I got better.
>>> But I got better these days.
I knew advance before it was rain.
>>> I knew in advance before it even rains.
as if I was a weather caster.
>>> As if I was a weather forecaster.
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