As it practice study
학생이 쓴 원문
If we use translator it is good for conversation people how different languages . It is more convenient advantage than disadvantage.
But don\'t careful to depend on translator.
I want to growth English languages skills , I don\'t usually use translator. I just using as practice study .
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Un! How’s everything at work? I hope things are going smoothly. Thanks again for finishing your essay today! I encourage you to review my suggestions and keep writing—you\'re making great progress!
But don\'t careful to depend on translator.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
If we use translator it is good for conversation people how different languages.
REVISED: Using a translator can be helpful for conversations with people who speak different languages.
It is more convenient advantage than disadvantage.
REVISED: It\'s often more convenient and has more advantages than disadvantages.
But don\'t careful to depend on translator.
REVISED: However, it\'s important not to rely too much on it.
I want to growth English languages skills , I don\'t usually use translator.
REVISED: I want to improve my English skills, so I don\'t use a translator often.
I just using as practice study .
REVISED: I mainly use it as a tool for practice and study.
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