As speaking of culture, there are hanbok and songpyun and so on.

2018-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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In my nation, Korea, has a traditional culture before one century's age . About 100 years ago, Korea has forgot it's national right to japan. From this time korea started to open to other nations. before that time, Korea has a lot of traditional treasures. If I pick up the point of your question, what it will be.. well... We live in modern 21 century. I don't know what the topic of this story, if forced me to name it, It sould be traditional house of korea hanok. I don't know what I will answer. Korea is oriental. And it is peninsular sorrounded by japan and china. Originally korea has no language but hanmun which borrowed from china. Korea served china as a big nation than us. thanks for reading. The answer for your question is a bit confused me. sorry.

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In my nation, Korea, has a traditional culture before one century\'s age .
About 100 years ago, Korea has forgot it\'s national right to japan. From this time korea started to open to other nations.
before that time, Korea has a lot of traditional treasures.
If I pick up the point of your question, what it will be.. well...
We live in modern 21 century.
I don\'t know what the topic of this story, if forced me to name it, It sould be traditional house of korea hanok.
I don\'t know what I will answer.
Korea is oriental.
And it is peninsular sorrounded by japan and china.
Originally korea has no language but hanmun which borrowed from china.
Korea served china as a big nation than us.



Hi, Mr. [이름]! ^^

The question on your homework last Monday means \"what are the three traditional cultural norms in your country?\"

For example, Koreans must use \"honorific.\" to older people for respect. But these days, some Koreans think that rude people must not be respected regardless of their age.

Second, traditionally, women must stay at home to take care of their children. But these days a lot of women have work and don\'t want to take care of their children by themselves.


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