As time goes by, it would be changed.
학생이 쓴 원문
There were many situations that I had to choose one or something to do. Maybe from now on, those will happen in my life.
When I was a young usually my parents’ sayings and my own thinking or dreams influenced on my choices. But after marriage, I tend to consider my daughtor, husband and other peopele even the families in laws.
Nevertheless these days I have a tendency of trying to think of me first. Because I realized that I should be happy and comfort otherwise everyone surrounded me isn’t happy.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Ju [이름]!
We make personal decisions to cultivate self-love and self-trust, to lead a genuine and satisfying life, and to be accountable for our own prosperity. Making our own decisions gives us the ability to take charge of our life, follow our own goals, and become independent and self-sufficient. Being present and realizing that we are the constant in our life and have all we need to thrive within ourselves is ultimately what it means to choose ourselves.
Thank you for answering your homework.^^
__T. Mayleen :)
There were many situations that I had to choose one or something to do. Maybe from now on, those will happen in my life.
>>> There were many situations in which I had to choose just one thing to do. Maybe from now on, these will happen more often in my life.
When I was a young usually my parents’ sayings and my own thinking or dreams influenced on my choices. But after marriage, I tend to consider my daughtor, husband and other peopele even the families in laws.
>>> When I was younger, my parents\' remarks and my own thoughts or dreams affected my decisions. However, after marriage, I tend to consider my daughter, husband, and other people, including my in-laws.
Nevertheless these days I have a tendency of trying to think of me first. Because I realized that I should be happy and comfort otherwise everyone surrounded me isn’t happy.
>>> Nevertheless, I tend to prioritize myself these days. It\'s because I knew that I needed to be happy and comfortable; else, everyone around me would be unhappy.
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