Asian
학생이 쓴 원문
Some Asians had experienced to be dominated by Western countries.
It is strange phenomenon that such people considered to discriminate and ignore others according to skin color and economic status.
It might be that their\'s the experience of dominated fostered a desire to dominate and power about others.
I think these are distorted values and shallow power supremacy.
When we do not reflect , it is easy to fall into greed and power desire.
강사 첨삭
Ms [이름]!
Some people would always want to be higher and better than others. We seldom see humble people.
Have a great weekend!
Aki~
Some Asians had experienced to be dominated by Western countries.
>>> Some Asians had experienced being dominated by Western countries.
It is strange phenomenon that such people considered to discriminate and ignore others according to skin color and economic status.
>>> It is a strange phenomenon that such people are considered to discriminate and ignore others according to skin color and economic status.
It might be that their\'s the experience of dominated fostered a desire to dominate and power about others.
>>> It might be that there\'s the experience of being dominated that fostered a desire to dominate and have power over others.
I think these are distorted values and shallow power supremacy.
>>> CORRECT!
When we do not reflect, it is easy to fall into greed and power desire.
>>> CORRECT!
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