Asian Game ranked 3
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Asian Game was ended on Sunday. And Korea\'s finally ranked 3.
>> Asian Games had ended on Sunday and Korea was finally ranked 3rd.
It was 24yeras ago to ranked 3.
>> It was 24 years ago when we ranked 3rd.
Korea usually ranked 2 but this time Korea didn\'t do well at archering and gun.
>> Korea was usually second but this time, Korea didn\'t do well in archery and gun.
But Korea got a gold meadal at Baseball and soccer and so on.
>> But Korea got a gold medal in Baseball, soccer and other events.
In Asian Game baseball and soccer is the hottest game.
>> In Asian Games, baseball and soccer are the hottest games.
In my classmates there is a someone who selected as a representaive of Korea on skateboarding.
>> Among my classmates, there was one who was selected as a representative of Korea in skateboarding.
But he lost the game with 1point.
>> But he lost the game with 1 point.
Even if Korea got a gold meadal on baseball Korea baseball team got a lot of blaming.
>> Even if Korea got a gold medal in baseball, our baseball team got a lot of blaming.
Becaue Korea baseball team selected someone who didn\'t get a good score but wants to don\'t go to army.
>> Because Korea baseball team selected someone who didn\'t get a good score but only wants to avoid going to the military.
And the results of game with easy team was not really good.
>> So the results of the game with the easier/weaker teams was not really good.
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