Asian game starts
학생이 쓴 원문
Yesterday Korea team won soccer to barayin for 6:0. And Yesterday Korea team won North Korea team using handball.Basketball game was started and Baseball game will start soon.This year Asian Game is held in Indonesia.And my classmate is going to play skateboarding in Asian Game.
강사 첨삭
Yesterday Korea team won soccer to barayin for 6:0.
>> Yesterday, Korea won soccer over Bahrain for 6:0.
And Yesterday Korea team won North Korea team using handball.
>> Also yesterday Korea team won over North Korea team using handball.
Basketball game was started and Baseball game will start soon.
>> Basketball game has started and Baseball game will start soon.
This year Asian Game is held in Indonesia.
>> Correct
And my classmate is going to play skateboarding in Asian Game.
>> Correct
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