Aside from eggs, what other kinds of food are a great source of protein?
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There are meat, bean, milk and fish.
First, the meat have many protein, but they have many blood too, if we have a many blood, it will be dangerous.
Second, bean have a many proteins too, but I like the green bean and I don\'t like a black beans.
Thrid, milk have a many nutrient like calcium and protein, I have protein, calcium and minerals.
Lastly, fish have protein too, but I like the fat, but I don\'t like not a fat.
These are aside from eggs, there are for example, meat, fish, milk and bean.
And aside from these, there are many protein food.
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There are meat, beans, milk and fish.
>> CORRECT!
First, the meat have many protein, but they have many blood too, if we have a many blood, it will be dangerous.
>> First, meat has many protein, but they have a lot of blood too, if we have a lot of blood, it will be dangerous.
Second, bean have a many proteins too, but I like the green bean and I don\'t like a black beans.
>> Second, beans have a lot of proteins too, but I like green beans more than black beans.
Thrid, milk have a many nutrient like calcium and protein, I have protein, calcium and minerals.
>> Third, milk has many nutrients like calcium and protein, and if drink it, I have protein, calcium, and minerals.
Lastly, fish have protein too, but I like the fat, but I don\'t like not a fat.
>> Lastly, all kinds of fish have protein too; I like the fat, but I don\'t like to get fat.
These are aside from eggs, there are for example, meat, fish, milk and bean.
>> These are examples of food rich in protein, aside from eggs.
And aside from these, there are many protein food.
>> And aside from these, there are many food that are sources of protein.
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