Aside from English, what other language would you want to be good at? Why?
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Aside from English, what other language would you want to be good at? Why?
I would like to learn about Chinese. Because, when I was 15 years old, learned Chinese by home-schooling method (teacher visited my home for once a week). So, my Chinese speaking skill was not good at, and Korea middle school was very important period. Thus, I quit that study. After I was 20 years, learned Chinese again. Because, in the future, when I to be a nurse, it’s necessary to caring for foreign patients. So, I got a Chinese certification of 4 grade. But I must many of nursing major study, so I quit a study Chinese again.
In conclusion, I feel inconvenience that, so if I must choose for learn language, I choose Chinese. (there’s no special reason.. ha ha..)
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Thank you for this [이름] [이름]. Chinese is also a highly spoken language is many parts of the world.
I would like to learn about Chinese. Because, when I was 15 years old, learned Chinese by home-schooling method (teacher visited my home for once a week).
>>> I would like to learn about Chinese because when I was 15 years old, I learned Chinese through home-schooling method (teacher visited my home once a week).
So, my Chinese speaking skill was not good at, and Korea middle school was very important period.
>>> So, my Chinese speaking skill was not good and Korea middle school was a very important period.
Thus, I quit that study.
>>> correct
After I was 20 years, learned Chinese again. Because, in the future, when I to be a nurse, it’s necessary to caring for foreign patients.
>>> When I was 20 years old, I learned Chinese again because in the future, when I to be a nurse, it’s necessary for caring for foreign patients.
So, I got a Chinese certification of 4 grade.
>>> So, I got a Chinese certification of grade 4.
But I must many of nursing major study, so I quit a study Chinese again.
>>> But I must study hard and a lot in the nursing major, so I quit studying Chinese again.
In conclusion, I feel inconvenience that, so if I must choose for learn language, I choose Chinese. (there’s no special reason.. ha ha..)
>>> In conclusion, I feel inconvenienced that, if I must choose to learn a language, I would choose Chinese. (there’s no special reason.. ha ha..)
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