Aside from famine, what do you think are the other bad things that war could bring?

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~Teacher Lucy

War is caused many bad things.

>>War caused many bad things.

I think one big damage of those is to be sacrificed many people including soldiers.

>>I think one big damage is to sacrifice many people including soldiers.

Especially, because of wars, many civilians lost their family without knowing the reason in the world.
>>Especially, because of wars, many civilians lost their family without knowing the reason of dying.
Losing precious people of mine is the most sad thing in our life.

>>Losing precious people of ours is the most sad thing in our life.

 If I lose my family due to war, I can’t live anymore.

>>CORRECT!

>>I can\'t live anymore if I lose my family due to war.

 Because they are one of the reasons of living.
>>CORRECT!
The Korean War broke out on June 25, 1950.

>>CORRECT!

The war stopped on July 27, 1953 but, Korea suffered economic and social damage.

>>The war stopped on July 27, 1953 but, Korea suffered economically and social damage.

It took a long time to recover the damage.
>>CORRECT!

>>It took a long time to recover the damages. 
 Furthermore, many lives were lost including Koreans and the UN forces.

>>CORRECT!

Also, we are part with family forcibly because of being divided my country.

>>CORRECT!

 It is also concluded to lose family.

>>CORRECT!

>> It is also concluded to lose more family.

 Because of this, we can’t meet our families before reuniting separated families and yet we can’t meet them anytime.
>>CORRECT!
I wish that it doesn’t happen to lose our precious people anymore due to war.

>>CORRECT!