Aside from financial reasons, why do we need to have a job?
학생이 쓴 원문
Financial reasons take up alomost 100% in having a job.
Another reason is preventing a laziness.
If I do nothing, I wolud be lazy soon.
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Financial reasons take up alomost 100% in having a job.
>> Financial reasons account for almost 100% of the motivation for having a job.
Another reason is preventing a laziness.
>> Another reason is to prevent laziness.
If I do nothing, I wolud be lazy soon.
>> If I did nothing, I would become lazy quickly.
>> Financial reasons account for almost 100% of the motivation for having a job.
Another reason is preventing a laziness.
>> Another reason is to prevent laziness.
If I do nothing, I wolud be lazy soon.
>> If I did nothing, I would become lazy quickly.
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