Aside from the language barrier, what challenges did you face as an expat in [이름]gary?

2025-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Caitlyn

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i was difficult about to three reason in [이름]gary. in first, korean time and [이름]gary time is different in eight hours. so i was difficult to contact to korea people. second, i didn\'t found new clothes awesome in [이름]gary. so i was wear same clothes sometimes. third, i missed korean food. always i ate korean style food in lunch, but those was not delicious. only taset was sweet and salty.

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Hi, [이름]! 
I can imagine how homesick you felt when you stayed in [이름]gary. Missing people in Korea and also the food must have made you lonely, but at least you survived and experienced living there for a year!
- T. Caitlyn 
i was difficult about to three reason in [이름]gary.
>> I had difficulties for three reasons in [이름]gary.
in first, korean time and [이름]gary time is different in eight hours.
>> First, Korean time and [이름]gary time are different by eight hours.
so i was difficult to contact to korea people.
>> So it was difficult for me to contact Korean people.
second, i didn\'t found new clothes awesome in [이름]gary.
>> Second, I didn’t find any awesome new clothes in [이름]gary.
so i was wear same clothes sometimes.
>> So sometimes I wore the same clothes.
third, I missed Korean food.
>> CORRECT
always i ate korean style food in lunch, but those was not delicious.
>> I always ate Korean-style food for lunch, but it was not delicious.
only taset was sweet and salty.
>> The taste was sweet and salty.

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