Aside from yourself, do you also worry about the health of those around you?
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Of course, I’m very worrying about the health of those around me, especially those who are close to me such as parents, boyfriend, old friends.
Nowadays with the COVID-19, I used to ask after them more often.
Including me, most of them have gotten infected with COVID-19. And the situation may continued.. I hope them to recover quickly and be healthy.
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Good day, Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Of course, I’m very worrying about the health of those around me, especially those who are close to me such as parents, boyfriend, old friends.
>> Of course, I’m very worryed about the health of those around me, especially those who are close to me such as my parents, my boyfriend, and old friends.
Nowadays with the COVID-19, I used to ask after them more often.
>> Nowadays with the COVID-19, I am used to asking them about their condition more often.
Including me, most of them have gotten infected with COVID-19.
Including me, most of them have gotten infected with COVID-19.
>> CORRECT!
And the situation may continued..
>> This situation may continue for quite a long time.
I hope them to recover quickly and be healthy.
>> I hope for their quick recovery and be healthy.
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