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2021-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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Well, I don\'t know that I think I don\'t tell first, but I am wondering, where do you live, how old, and what hobby do you have etc. I think it\'s good to ask about the surrounding environment or seen things. What do you ask the first met someone? I think I asked about the children when my children was younger. However, now, I guess that it\'s usually about pet dogs.

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Good morning Ms. [Name]! How was your sleep? Thank you for the effort of writing your thoughts. I appreciate everything you do in your studies. Keep it up :)
~Aki
Well, I don\'t know that I think I don\'t tell first, but I am wondering, where do you live, how old, and what hobby do you have etc.
>>> Well, I don\'t usually talk and give information to a person I just met. But I am curious on some basic information like where does he/she live, how old is he/she, what is his/her favorite hobby.
I think it\'s good to ask about the surrounding environment or seen things.
>>> I think it\'s good to start and talk about the surroundings or the things we see around us.
What do you ask the first met someone?
>>> What do you ask when you first met someone?
I think I asked about the children when my children was younger.
>>> I think I would ask about his/her children especially if the child is younger.
However, now, I guess that it\'s usually about pet dogs
>>> However, these days, I guess it is usually about having dogs.

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