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I agree that we and society should protect disabilities\'s right and give to chance to live together.
But I wonder that even disabilities allowed to harass others.
Ju Ho min as a famous webtoon artist is a terrible parent in that school.
His sun harms others, acting recklessly, violently.
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Hello, Ms. [이름]!
I understand your point. While regular schools in the Philippines welcome students with disabilities, institutions should first conduct an assessment before admission. Students may join regular schools if they can demonstrate that they are capable of functioning in a large group. However, if they display aggressive behavior, they are usually placed in special schools designed for their needs. During my internship in a special school, I also encountered violent students who were very difficult to manage, so this issue should be carefully considered.
Thank you for this!
Aki~
I agree that we and society should protect disabilities\'s right and give to chance to live together.
>>> I agree that we and society should protect disabilities and give to a chance to live together.
But I wonder that even disabilities allowed to harass others.
>>> But I wonder if even disabilities are allowed to harass others.
Ju Ho min as a famous webtoon artist is a terrible parent in that school.
>>> Ju Ho Min, as a famous webtoon artist, is a terrible parent at that school.
His sun harms others, acting recklessly, violently.
>>> His son harms others, acting recklessly, violently.
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