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2021-03-17 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

학생이 쓴 원문

As I told you, when you ask me, If you think of my situation, I would be thankful to you. Today, you asked me to make a sentence without thinking so I confused. Anyway I am pleased to meet you in the class. I plan to go to the US to study in a law school so I am studying English. Also, because I can’t speak English well please understand me even though my wording is not good sometimes.

강사 첨삭


Hello there [이름] thank you for expressing your thoughts. Don\'t worry I will always help you in your progress. Stay well.
~Teacher Aki^^

As I told you, when you ask me, If you think of my situation, I would be thankful to you.
>> As I told you, when you asked me, if you consider my situation, I would be thankful to you.
Today, you asked me to make a sentence without thinking so I confused.
>> Today, When you asked me to make a sentence, I was not thinking so I got confused.
OR: When you asked me today to make a sentence, I didn\'t give a thought that is why I got confused.
Anyway I am pleased to meet you in the class.
>> CORRECT
OR: I am happy to meet you in the class.
I plan to go to the US to study in a law school so I am studying English.
>> CORRECT
OR:  
I plan to go to the US to study in a law school so I am learning the English language..
 Also, because I can’t speak English well please understand me even though my wording is not good sometimes.
>> Also, please understand me because I can\'t speak English well and sometimes my words are not good.

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