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Hi paula!
I supposed to study newspaper after a month.
But I think this book is really nice. I want to go the end of it.
I hope we will finish 1 unit a day at least. I will make sure to preview and practice before class. We would need to be cheer up.
When we wouldn't finish to discuss a unit. I hope we would go over next
unit tomorrow after the day.
I thought the book has a lot words and phrase and phrasal verbs.
If I study the book fast, I will speak more fluently. I'm sure!
Please make our way go fast!!
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name],
A melodious Tuesday to you and your loved ones! ^.^
Thanks a lot for telling me what you really want me to do in our class! ^^
This time it is clearer.
You are guiding me to have better class with you.
Thank you once again! ^^,
Anyway, I will make the pace of your class fast.
So, see you very soon! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Hi paula!>> Hi Paula!I supposed to study newspaper after a month.>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I wanted to change my course into newspaper after a month.
But I think this book is really nice.
>> But, I think this book is really nice.
I want to go the end of it.>> I want us to finish the book until its last page.
I hope we will finish 1 unit a day at least.
>> I hope we could finish at least 1 unit a day.
>> OR: I hope we could finish at least 1 unit per day.
I will make sure to preview and practice before class.
>> I will make sure to preview and practice before our classes.
>> OR: I will make sure to preview and practice before each class.
We would need to be cheer up. When we wouldn\'t finish to discuss a unit.>> We need to cheer up when we don\'t finish discussing a unit.
I hope we would go over next unit tomorrow after the day.>> I hope we would go over the next unit the next day.
I thought the book has a lot words and phrase and phrasal verbs. >> I think the book has a lot of words, phrases and phrasal verbs.
If I study the book fast, I will speak more fluently.
>> CORRECT!
I\'m sure!>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I\'m sure of it!
Please make our way go fast!!
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: Please make it possible!
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