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2016-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Hi paula! I supposed to study newspaper after a month. But I think this book is really nice. I want to go the end of it. I hope we will finish 1 unit a day at least. I will make sure to preview and practice before class. We would need to be cheer up. When we wouldn't finish to discuss a unit. I hope we would go over next unit tomorrow after the day. I thought the book has a lot words and phrase and phrasal verbs. If I study the book fast, I will speak more fluently. I'm sure! Please make our way go fast!!

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Dear [Name],   A melodious Tuesday to you and your loved ones! ^.^   Thanks a lot for telling me what you really want me to do in our class! ^^ This time it is clearer. You are guiding me to have better class with you. Thank you once again! ^^,   Anyway, I will make the pace of your class fast. So, see you very soon! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Hi paula!>> Hi Paula!I supposed to study newspaper after a month.>> CORRECT! >> OR: I wanted to change my course into newspaper after a month. But I think this book is really nice. >> But, I think this book is really nice. I want to go the end of it.>> I want us to finish the book until its last page. I hope we will finish 1 unit a day at least. >> I hope we could finish at least 1 unit a day. >> OR: I hope we could finish at least 1 unit per day. I will make sure to preview and practice before class. >> I will make sure to preview and practice before our classes. >> OR: I will make sure to preview and practice before each class. We would need to be cheer up. When we wouldn\'t finish to discuss a unit.>> We need to cheer up when we don\'t finish discussing a unit. I hope we would go over next unit tomorrow after the day.>> I hope we would go over the next unit the next day. I thought the book has a lot words and phrase and phrasal verbs. >> I think the book has a lot of words, phrases and phrasal verbs. If I study the book fast, I will speak more fluently. >> CORRECT! I\'m sure!>> CORRECT! >> OR: I\'m sure of it! Please make our way go fast!! >> CORRECT! >> OR: Please make it possible!

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