Asking for a replacement.
학생이 쓴 원문
I bought a wall clock online 2 weeks ago.
When I received it.
The hands of clock didn’t work.
So I called the company of clock and I ask for
replacement of it.
They said that they would be check the
things first
And then they send the new one If the things wrong.
So I received the new one
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]ny!
Having this kind of experience is stressful BUT if the company cooperates and change them immediately, then it\'s good for you.
I had an experience online and the \"seller\" did not replace the defective item. Sol until now, I don\'t buy electronic gadgets online.
Thanks for this!
Aki~
I bought a wall clock online 2 weeks ago.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> I purchased a wall clock online two weeks ago
When I received it. The hands of clock didn’t work.
>>> When I received it, the hands of the clock are not working.
So I called the company of clock and I ask for replacement of it.
>>> So I called the company of the clock and I ask for a replacement.
They said that they would be check the things first
>>> They said that they would check the things first.
And then they send the new one If the things wrong.
>>> And then they send the new one If things are wrong.
So I received the new one.
>>> CORRECT!
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