Asking Questions.

2010-11-25 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hello This is [이름]. As you know , we are planning to go on a picnic this saturday. I have some questions about it. We have decided to go to Baebang Mountain. But I got hurt on my knee yesterday. So now I have a little difficulty to move. Why don't we go to the park instead of mountain?. and What time do tou want to meet? I think that 10 am will be good for us. Do you want me to bring something? Give me your opinion.

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Hello [이름], Can't say much my dear, you are really very good! Just continue what youre doing and I know, in no time you will be much better than now.. Talk to you again later my dear... T.Cam   Hello This is [이름]. >>correct!As you know , we are planning to go on a picnic this saturday. >>correct! (make sure proper nouns are written in capital letters; Saturday)I have some questions about it. >>correct!We have decided to go to Baebang Mountain. >>correct!But I got hurt on my knee yesterday. >>correct!So now I have a little difficulty to move. >>correct!Why don't we go to the park instead of mountain?. >>correct!and What time do tou want to meet? >>correct!I think that 10 am will be good for us. >>correct!Do you want me to bring something?>>correct!Give me your opinion. >>correct!

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