Asking Questions.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello This is [이름].
As you know , we are planning to go on a picnic this saturday.
I have some questions about it.
We have decided to go to Baebang Mountain.
But I got hurt on my knee yesterday.
So now I have a little difficulty to move.
Why don't we go to the park instead of mountain?.
and What time do tou want to meet?
I think that 10 am will be good for us.
Do you want me to bring something?
Give me your opinion.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Can't say much my dear, you are really very good!
Just continue what youre doing and I know, in no time you will be much better than now..
Talk to you again later my dear...
T.Cam
Hello This is [이름].
>>correct!As you know , we are planning to go on a picnic this saturday.
>>correct! (make sure proper nouns are written in capital letters; Saturday)I have some questions about it.
>>correct!We have decided to go to Baebang Mountain.
>>correct!But I got hurt on my knee yesterday.
>>correct!So now I have a little difficulty to move.
>>correct!Why don't we go to the park instead of mountain?.
>>correct!and What time do tou want to meet?
>>correct!I think that 10 am will be good for us.
>>correct!Do you want me to bring something?>>correct!Give me your opinion.
>>correct!
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