Asking your address

2010-01-04 · 첨삭 강사 RJ

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Dear [Name].Lee Good day. Thank you for your corporation, in advance. And I hope you had a great new year. I believe you receive my former E-mail. I am [이름] from ENK.co.kr in korea and in charge of your company. I am mailing you to ask your address because we would like to send some souvenior for you like the diary which is made by ours and our catalogue. So pls kindly inform us your address. I appreciate you reply as soon as possible. Have a nice day. Best regards [이름].

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! I'm glad you enrolled in our program. I look forward to knowing you better.   T. RJ   Here are the corrections to your composition:   Dear [Name].Lee>>>Dear [Name]. [Name],Good day.>>CORRECT Thank you for your corporation, in advance.>>Thank you for your cooperation in advance. And I hope you had a great new year.>>And I hope you had a great New Year's celebration. I believe you receive my former E-mail. >>I believe you recieved my previous e-mail.I am [이름] from ENK.co.kr in korea and in charge of your company.>>I am [이름] from ENK.co.kr in Korea and in charge of your company. I am mailing you to ask your address because we would like to send>>I am mailing you to ask for your address because we would like to send some souvenior for you like the diary which is made by ours and our catalogue.>>a souvenior for you like the diary in our catalogue which is made by our company. So pls kindly inform us your address. >>So pls kindly inform us of your address.I appreciate you reply as soon as possible.>>I appreciate your quick reply. Have a nice day. >>CORRECTBest regards[이름].

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