Aspect

2012-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Joey

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*** What aspect would you like to improve within yourself and why? I keep my hair correctness and a few is turn over. ( |||||||| ) like ( ///////// ) This keyborad doesn't many emotiocon. so I can't express like that. Well. think this softly (^^)

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HAPPY FRIDAY TO YOU [이름]!!!                             Thank you for sending me a composition..I really appreciate!So let me help you with some of your grammar errors.ok...Have a great friday!!!Enjoy your weekend! Teacher Janette. <<Correctionc>> *** What aspect would you like to improve within yourself and why?>>Correct.I keep my hair correctness and a few is turn over.>>I like to keep to make over my hair.( |||||||| ) like ( ///////// )>>Like this.This keyborad doesn\'t many emotiocon. so I can\'t express like that. >>This keyboard doesn\'t have many emotions, so I can\'t express it. Well. think this softly (^^) >>Well, think about this.

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