Aspect
학생이 쓴 원문
*** What aspect would you like to improve within yourself and why?
I keep my hair correctness and a few is turn over.
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like ( ///////// )
This keyborad doesn't many emotiocon. so I can't express like that.
Well. think this softly (^^)
강사 첨삭
HAPPY FRIDAY TO YOU [이름]!!!
Thank you for sending me a composition..I really appreciate!So let me help you with some of your grammar errors.ok...Have a great friday!!!Enjoy your weekend!
Teacher Janette.
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*** What aspect would you like to improve within yourself and why?>>Correct.I keep my hair correctness and a few is turn over.>>I like to keep to make over my hair.( |||||||| ) like ( ///////// )>>Like this.This keyborad doesn\'t many emotiocon. so I can\'t express like that.
>>This keyboard doesn\'t have many emotions, so I can\'t express it. Well. think this softly (^^)
>>Well, think about this.
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