Assignement

2016-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

I think government should ban illegal downloading. Creaters work hard to make a good creation. Their rights should be protected by law.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Jacob! ^_^ Good evening!   Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I agree with you. Unauthorized duplication and/or distribution of media including downloading, file sharing, etc., is unethical. It\'s like stealing someone else\'s idea or work of art.   Have a great weekend!   _Teacher Mayleen^^   I think government should ban illegal downloading. >> I think the government should ban illegal downloading sites. Creaters work hard to make a good creation. >> Creators work hard to make good creations or master piece. Their rights should be protected by law. >> Correct!

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