Assignement
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I think government should ban illegal downloading. Creaters work hard to make a good creation. Their rights should be protected by law.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jacob! ^_^
Good evening!
Thank you for accomplishing your homework.
I agree with you. Unauthorized duplication and/or distribution of media including downloading, file sharing, etc., is unethical.
It\'s like stealing someone else\'s idea or work of art.
Have a great weekend!
_Teacher Mayleen^^
I think government should ban illegal downloading.
>> I think the government should ban illegal downloading sites.
Creaters work hard to make a good creation.
>> Creators work hard to make good creations or master piece.
Their rights should be protected by law.
>> Correct!
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