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2016-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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[workplaces, solution, salaries, causes, found, equal, lack. pay] A report has revealed that men are paid higher [salaries] and receive bigger bonuses than women. The gender pay gap still exists in companies and [workplaces] in many countries, despite legislation to ensure [equal] pay. Whatever the [causes], this modern-day problem continues to exist and a [solution] needs to be [found].

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Jacob! :)   Wow! You submitted your homework again. I\'m glad that all of the answers are correct this time. ^_- Thank you so much for taking time to accomplish your homework. I enjoy reading your compositions. See you in our next class. Have a good night!   _T. Mayleen ^^   A report has revealed that men are paid higher [salaries] and receive bigger bonuses than women. >> Correct! The gender pay gap still exists in companies and [workplaces] in many countries, despite legislation to ensure [equal] pay.>> Correct!Whatever the [causes], this modern-day problem continues to exist and a [solution] needs to be [found]. >> Correct!

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