assignment

Hi there Gyu!

Great Monday morning to you!

Well, how was your weekend? I hope you had a good one.

Anyway, thanks for sharing your thoughts here with regards to our topic.
I like the way you compare and contrast a definition of an adventure to studying English.

I also like how you played your words.
Good job on that!
Keep it up!

See you later then!

Have a great day ahead!

Always,

Kathrine  ^^ 

Q. Would you say that learning English is a kind of adventure? Why or why not

In adventure movies, main characters are faced with difficult and dangerous situations.

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Like them, people get lots of troubles which are tough to solve in their life.

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So I tell you two reasons about why learning English is an adventure.

>>  So I will tell you 2 reasons why learning English is an adventure.
 First, learning English is a challenge.

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Because English is not our mother language.

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So whatever we learn in English, it is the first time we experience.

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>> or: So whatever we are learning in English, it is the first time we are experiencing it.

Alphabets, pronunciation, words are assaults which we have to overcome like adventures.

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 Next, if people reach the goal they want, they get rewards.

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>> or: Next, if people would reach the goal that they want, they could get some rewards.

For example, if heroes in a movie overcome adversities, they receive what they want such as treasures, peace or something like that.

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>> or: For example, if heroes in a movie would be able to overcome some adversities, they could receive whatever they want such as treasures, peace or something like that.

And if people become to be good at English, they can get better job, make foreign friends.

>> And if people become to be good in  English, they can get a better job, or make foreign friends.
 Even if learning English is an adventure and difficult to study, it is just tiny one of our lives.

>>  Even if learning English is an adventure and difficult to study, it is just a tiny one in  our lives.

So we don\'t give it up easily. (1000words limit)

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>> or: So we should not give it up easily.