assignment
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Gyu!
Great morning to you!
Well, reading historical books are really exciting.
And I am actually fascinated by history books when I am reading about it.
Wars, evolution of one country, the people, culture, and anything connected to history are my thing.
Anyway, I hope that you would be able to write one someday.
And I would be your number one fan. kkkk
See you later!
Enjoy your day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If you wrote a book, what would you write about?
I am a big fan of history.
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Especially I have a lot of interest of the war of the Middle age.
>> I especially have a lot of interests of the was during the Middle Age.
The age before guns were invented, people fought with swords, bows, shields etc.
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The more armors were thick, the more the weapons were strong.
>> The thicker the armors are, the stronger the weapons they have.
And it was really difficult to occupy a castle.
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Some castles have never been occupied.
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So I want to write how the ones could protect from attack.
>> So I want to write how the ones was able to protect itself from the attack.
And there were lots of weapons at that time.
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And it depends on the area.
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For example, Asian didn\'t have to wear thick armors because ancient Asian\'s cross bows is less stronger than Europe\'s.
>> For example, Asians didn\'t have to wear thick armors because ancient Asian\'s cross bows is less stronger than Europe\'s.
So if I wrote a book, then I would wrote about the change, differences between Asian\'s and Western\'s
>> So, if I would have written a book, then I would have written about the changes and differences between Asians and Westerners.
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