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2014-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Q. Are there any famous people you would like to meet? Who and what would you say to him/her? A. I really want to meet David Ames in the movie 'Vanilla Sky which starts Tom Cruise and Cameron Diaz and is one of the most famous movies over the world. David Ames is acted by Tom Cruise. I watched it more than 10 times because I like he acts and the story of the movie is awesome! In the movie, he is rich so he enjoys his life all the time and one day he falls in love with a girl at first sight. At that time I felt like falling in love with a girl because of his great acting. He really seemed like falling love and when he is having a tough time, he is good at expressing his feelings such as frustration, rage, sadness and so on. But finally he overcomes everything. So if I had a chance to meet him, I'd ask him how to accept everything.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Gyu!

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.

It has been a long time that I have watched that movie so I do not remember already about it.

But I agree that Tom Cruise was really good in his acting in that movie.

I guess that you felt connected with the movie because of how David Ames fell in love. kkkkk

Anyway, see you later!


Always,
Kathrine ^^



Q. Are there any famous people you would like to meet? Who and what would you say to him/her?

A. I really want to meet David Ames in the movie \'Vanilla Sky which starts Tom Cruise and Cameron Diaz and is one of the most famous movies over the world.

>>  I really want to meet David Ames in the movie \'Vanilla Sky which stars Tom Cruise and Cameron Diaz and is one of the most famous movies over the world.

David Ames is acted by Tom Cruise.

>>  David Ames was portrayed by Tom Cruise.

I watched it more than 10 times because I like he acts and the story of the movie is awesome!

>>  I watched it for more than 10 times because I like  how he acted and the story of the movie was awesome!

 In the movie, he is rich so he enjoys his life all the time and one day he falls in love with a girl at first sight.

>>  In the movie, he is rich so he enjoys his life all the time and one day he fell in love with a girl at first sight.

At that time I felt like falling in love with a girl because of his great acting.

>>  correct!

 He really seemed like falling love and when he is having a tough time, he is good at expressing his feelings such as frustration, rage, sadness and so on.

>>  He really seemed like his was falling in love and when he was having a tough time, hewas good at expressing his feelings such as frustration, rage, sadness and so on.

But finally he overcomes everything.

>>  correct!

So if I had a chance to meet him, I\'d ask him how to accept everything.

>>  So if I have a chance to meet him, I will ask him on how to accept everything.

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