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Hi there my dear [이름]!
Happy Monday!
Thank you once again for doing a great job in sharing your thoughts about this.
Two thumbs up for a job well done!
I do hope you will keep up the good work...
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xoxoTeacher Cam^^
-What I have to be careful every time reading a new writing-
The most inevitable factor I should have is to read it without any worries, which can make me feel like I would not cover all of the contents in a constrained time.
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Everyone with no exception always worry about their competence to read because he or she might be embarrassed whenever faced with difficulty to decipher what he or she is reading.
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OR: Everyone with no exception always worry about their competence to read because he or she might be embarrassed whenever facing difficulty to decipher what he or she is reading.
Do not hesitate to handle any reading materials.
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On the other hand, to trust myself should be concerned.
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It must be the one that I have to possess.
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Lastly. go for what you are really want to get even though much of burdens get in the way of my path.
>>Lastly, go for what you really want to get even though much of burdens get in the way of my path.
Just think I like the hardship all the more because it is hard.
>>I just need to think I like hardships more because they are hard to achieve.
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