Assignment

2016-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Why do we get bored? -> I think repeated lifestyle make us boring... Most of people want stable and regular life... That give us stability but take away thrill from us... 2. What's the best way to stop being bored? -> In my opinion, Sometimes we need to escape from repeated life, experience new one and meet many people.

강사 첨삭

A happy Tuesday to you, Jacob! :)   Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework. I really appreciate that you took the time to impart your ideas. I definitely agree with what you have written. Staying in our comfort zones makes life boring. We need to get out and explore because life is too short for us not to seize it.   I\'ll see you in class. :)   _T. Mayleen ^^   1. Why do we get bored?-> I think repeated lifestyle make us boring...Most of people want stable and regular life... That give us stability but take away thrill from us... >> I think repeated lifestyle makes us bored. Most people want a stable, secure life which in a way takes away the thrill of living.2. What\'s the best way to stop being bored?-> In my opinion, Sometimes we need to escape from repeated life, experience new one and meet many people. >> In my opinion, sometimes we need to escape from our daily routines. Experience new things and meet new people.

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