Assignment
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you want people to remember you?
-> I hope people remember me as useful man. Because I always do my best to contribute group that I belong to.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Jacob!
Thank you for doing your homework.
It was a good answer, be remember as a \'useful\' man.
You can also use the terms \'helpful\', \'supportive\', and \'productive\'.
Nonetheless, you did a good job.
have a good night! ^_^
_T. Mayleen ^.^
I hope people remember me as useful man.
>> I hope people will remember me as a useful man.
Because I always do my best to contribute group that I belong to.
>> Because I always do my best to contribute to groups I belong to.
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