Assignment

2016-08-29 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

[workplaces, solution, salaries, causes, found, equal, lack. pay] A report has revealed that men are paid higher [salarie] and receive bigger bonuses than women. The gender pay gap still exists in companies and [causes] in many countries, despite legislation to ensure [equal] pay. Whatever the [workplaces], this modern-day problem continues to exist and a [lack] needs to be [pay].

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Jacob!   Be very careful with your spelling and read the sentences thoroughly for you not to miss anything, okay? :) Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I\'ll talk to you again tomorrow. See yah! ^_^   T. Mayleen ^_-   A report has revealed that men are paid higher [salarie] and receive bigger bonuses than women. >> Salaries BE CAREFUL WITH YOUR SPELLING.   The gender pay gap still exists in companies and [causes] in many countries, despite legislation to ensure [equal] pay.>> workplaces - equal Whatever the [workplaces], this modern-day problem continues to exist and a [lack] needs to be [pay]. >> causes - solution - found

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