Assignment

2016-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Essay: Why are selfies so popular? Are there places you should never take selfies? -> First of all, People want look nice in the photo. And people can choose among many selfies. I never take selfies outside. And I rarely take selfie in my home.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Jacob!   Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework. I have read it well. You like expressing your ideas or thoughts in a brief manner. Which is alright. It\'s very direct to the point and no going around the bush.   Great job over all! ^^   _T. Mayleen :)   First of all, People want look nice in the photo. >> First of all, people just want to look nice in photos. And people can choose among many selfies. >> Second, they can choose from the photos they took using their devices. I never take selfies outside. >> Correct! And I rarely take selfie in my home. >> And also, I rarely take selfies when I\'m at home.

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