Assignment
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Essay: Why are selfies so popular? Are there places you should never take selfies?
-> First of all, People want look nice in the photo. And people can choose among many selfies. I never take selfies outside. And I rarely take selfie in my home.
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Good evening, Jacob!
Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
I have read it well.
You like expressing your ideas or thoughts in a brief manner.
Which is alright.
It\'s very direct to the point and no going around the bush.
Great job over all! ^^
_T. Mayleen :)
First of all, People want look nice in the photo.
>> First of all, people just want to look nice in photos.
And people can choose among many selfies.
>> Second, they can choose from the photos they took using their devices.
I never take selfies outside.
>> Correct!
And I rarely take selfie in my home.
>> And also, I rarely take selfies when I\'m at home.
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