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2016-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Essay: What are the health risks associated with your lifestyle and environment? What health problems do you worry about most? My health problem that disturb me is backache. It is not serious but it often comes to me and gives lots of pain.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Jacob! ^^ Happy Friday! :)   Any special plans for your weekend? Thank you so much for answering the essay question. You gave a brief answer though. As for your backache, it could be due to wrong sleeping position. Reduce postural stress. Don\'t sleep on your stomach.   _T. Mayleen ^_-   My health problem that disturb me is backache. >> One health problem that bothers me is my backache.   It is not serious but it often comes to me and gives lots of pain. >> Though not serious, everytime it occurs it gives me a lot of pain.

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