ASSIGNMENT
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Essay: Is underpopulation a problem? Are there any positive things about overpopulation?
In my opinion, underpopulation is not a problem at least modern times. and I think postive things about overpopulation is competitive workforce. Because overpopulated region or country has lots of employment competition. So overpopulated region or coutry can produce competitive workforce.
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In my opinion, underpopulation is not a problem at least modern times.and I think postive things about overpopulation is competitive workforce.
>> In my opinion, underpopulation is not a problem in the modern times. I think the advantage of overpopulation is having a competitive workforce.
Because overpopulated region or country has lots of employment competition.
>> Overpopulated regions or countries will have fierce competition when it comes to employment.
So overpopulated region or coutry can produce competitive workforce.
>> However, overpopulated regions or countries can produce competitive workforces.
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